प्यास …

Posted on July 8, 2011 by ચેતના ભટ્ટ

इस कदर हम तरसे है ,तेरी प्यास में..!
जैसे बादल भी बरसे हो, तेरी आस में..!

बारिश की बुँदे पड़ी इस कदर…
जैसे खूदा भी रोया हो मेरे इस हाल में…!

આ રચનાને શેર કરો..
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5 Responses to प्यास …

  1. Anjali says:
    July 9, 2011 at 6:43 am

    Nice lines!!

    Reply
  2. Hema says:
    July 9, 2011 at 2:54 pm

    Superb…. Superb….

    Reply
  3. નિરાલી says:
    July 9, 2011 at 4:01 pm

    Great.. just one thing.. Generally in hindi the word “आश” is not used, in stead “आस” is used.. But just superb.. 🙂

    Reply
  4. ચેતના ભટ્ટ says:
    July 10, 2011 at 12:13 am

    Thank u “N!r Dr.”

    Reply
  5. અપેક્ષા સોલંકી says:
    July 14, 2011 at 11:37 pm

    क्या बात है! बहोत खूब..

    Reply

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