नो स्मोकिंग प्लीज़..

 

जिस बेशर्मी से तुने सिगरेट उठाई,
ऐसा लगा जैसे खुद अपनी चिता जलाई।

तुजे क्या लगा? जो हवा में गया वो धुँआ है?
वो तो तेरी रूह ने टुकडो में ली तेरे जिस्म से बिदाई।

बड़ा सरल सा भविष्य है: फेफड़े का केन्सर!
पहले रोग को लगाने मे, फिर उसे मिटाने मे पूंजी उड़ाई।

ज़रा सोच के देख, अपनी पत्नी को बिधवा,
और बच्चे? उनकी खुशियों मे क्यों आग लगाई?

पर भूली मैं, तुजे खुद अपनी ही पड़ी नहीं है!
तूँ भला क्यों मिटाएगा बूढ़े माँ बाप की तन्हाई?

छोड़ दे सिगरेट और बचाले अपनी बिखरती दुनिया,
बटोर ले वो जिंदगी जो तुने अब तक गँवाई।

આ રચનાને શેર કરો..
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10 Responses to नो स्मोकिंग प्लीज़..

  1. mustak says:

    very very very nice…….
    great job
    keep it up
    up 🙂

  2. ચેતના ભટ્ટ says:

    વાહ ક્યા બાત હે..!!!!!!!!!!

  3. નિરાલી says:

    Wooow aps.. Very nice subject.. N a superb creation..

    Loved the line, “वो तो तेरी रूह ने टुकडो में ली तेरे जिस्म से बिदाई। N of course loved whole poem.. Really great.. Again, I’m proud of you..

    Now I’m thinking to write on alcohol.. 😉 😀

  4. આશિષ says:

    बहोत अच्छे डॉक्टर साहिबा..

    એક નવા જ વિચાર ને ખૂબ સુંદરતા થી પ્રસ્તુત કર્યો છે..

    એકે એક લાઈન ચોટદાર છે..

    Wonderful!

  5. હાર્દિક પીઠડીયા says:

    छोड़ दे सिगरेट और बचाले अपनी बिखरती दुनिया,
    बटोर ले वो जिंदगी जो तुने अब तक गँवाई।

    mst lkhyu 6e….

  6. Thank you very much for such nice comments..

  7. Good! i think to make poster of these and paste at every public place , so that people can at least stop ‘smoking’ at public places. Even in the ST buses the smokers do not care about their own children,forget about the fellow passengers!
    I have come across a good book ‘ BROOM GROOM’ authored by Pawan Chaudary and Kiran Bedi, and also contains a message from Shri.APJ Abdul Kalam. Its about improving the way of life and improving Civil behaviour. Every Indian should read this to improve our ‘Civic Sense’ and ‘Civil Behaviour’ and help in make INDIA a better ‘civilised society’.

  8. Anjali says:

    I m thinking of quitting smoking after reading this..!
    😛

    Real good stuff here Aps!
    and very well said Avinashji.. Ideas from a true samaj shilpi… 🙂

    Keep up Aps!!

  9. @avinashji: Really nice idea sir.. thank you..

    @anjali: my pleasure.. 😉

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